Tuesday, October 14, 2008

!!!!MAN-MADE BIRDS!!!!

written on
13 august 2008

Four of you are in my room,
having no space to fly and bloom!
oh! how real you look!
and force me to keep hooked!
thank you very much for the solace you provide!

I bought you from the market,
to decorate my room a bit.
But you proved me wrong this time
by dancing on the beats of fan in rhyme.
thank you very much for the solace you provide!

My mood fluctuates and mind vibrates
on looking at you go round and rotate.
oh! the ecstasy and solace you provide!
keep flourishing in the way you are
thank you very much to keep on par!!!!!

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

nice poem. i also write poetry at wordprompts. hope you can come visit soon.many thanks!

establishingtheself said...

@your sassy reporter
thanks for your words dear
i have already visited..have a look!

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